I liked how you used the coherence principle in your blog post because it allows for the reader to really see the main points that you are trying to get across. You didn’t add any unnecessary extraneous information to confuse or overcomplicate and I think that it was very effective. Adding onto this, I liked how it was only presented in one format (the bullet points) because as the reader I feel like it was easier to follow than if you had presented it in more than one format.

I think that you could have improved your blog by utilizing the signalling principle, specifically where you had your bullet points. I think it would have been effective to bold or highlight the different principles just to break up the post a little bit and not have it all merge into one. 

Overall, great job!!

References: https://xinyili.opened.ca/2021/03/21/active-learning/