I really liked how you utilized the personalization principle because when I was reading your blog it felt as if we were having a conversation rather than a formal style. I think this is very effective as the reader is much more inclined to retain the information and be willing to read it and learn it. I also liked that you used the worked examples principle because you not only explained why Twine was effective, but you gave an instance it could actually be utilized in to help the reader see the value in Twine.

I think you could improve by using the segmenting principle because the blog is one continuous unit and I think breaking it up into different points would just make it easier for the reader to follow and grasp.

Overall, great job. I especially loved your twine story!!

References: https://sydneyellis.opened.ca/2021/03/05/topic-7-the-importance-of-storytelling/